As is expected from a begginer
As you have expressed you wish not to be held in a pro light but a beginners light. I can respect that. Comments: The clothes need to have had a little more time taken on them so that them look like clothes and not just blobs with color and design. The hair doesnt fit the head so try and gauge the sizeability a little better. Good Note: you wrote the action script ( i assume) and that is a big thing to do. Learning actionscript is a tough thing to do. Maybe not for a dress-up game but definitely a good thing to learn for future submissoins so stick with that. Overall it looked very rushed, however not the worst ive seen and ive seen alot of bad. Practice practice practice. Dont just pump crap out just for the fact of " oh look i made something" Work on something you can be proud of. It aint easy being an animator soi i suggest if there is some form of community college near you than see if they are having seminars on flash animating and try and slip in on a lecture or two. Although not recommend by law.