Timing needs to be tweaked
The animation is fluid and dynamic with the deformation and tweens, but the timing for when the hips reach their furthest frame is off just a little with the music. Wnough to make my brain feel off. You are literally off by a fraction of a second from it being 100% synched with the music. Other then that its fantastic!
I thought this would be shit. And then he started typing. You had me from there on
This is just awesome face, awesome face, skateboard, flying out of tree, awesome face.
I doubt anyone remebers but...
use "Testbug" as your name and reap the easy rewards
As is expected from a begginer
As you have expressed you wish not to be held in a pro light but a beginners light. I can respect that. Comments: The clothes need to have had a little more time taken on them so that them look like clothes and not just blobs with color and design. The hair doesnt fit the head so try and gauge the sizeability a little better. Good Note: you wrote the action script ( i assume) and that is a big thing to do. Learning actionscript is a tough thing to do. Maybe not for a dress-up game but definitely a good thing to learn for future submissoins so stick with that. Overall it looked very rushed, however not the worst ive seen and ive seen alot of bad. Practice practice practice. Dont just pump crap out just for the fact of " oh look i made something" Work on something you can be proud of. It aint easy being an animator soi i suggest if there is some form of community college near you than see if they are having seminars on flash animating and try and slip in on a lecture or two. Although not recommend by law.
This review is very helpful well to me any way and yes i did do everything i am just beginning to learn and understand action script and the high school im going to is a good animating school that will teach me stuff like action script and other things like that and i took in everything from this one to make a better one well stuff from this like the stick guy and some of the things where you put him but its not just going to be a remake of this its going to be much more one last thing you should do allot more reviews because it makes total scents to me and it was the best review of any of my flashes and its very helpful
Not another dress-up
Yep its just another dress up nothing special
Love it man
Keep it comin its like the best fusion of jazz and techno-ish sounds ive ever heard
It's more like mix of jazz and blues.
I actual love this. he symmetry rocks.
If this truly took 20 hours, you need to practice better time management, cause if and when you go to art college, they are gonna tear you apart on your time management. Other then that a little anime-ish for my taste but if you put in the time it will pay off big for you. You are already about 50 percent there with the proportions of the body. Arms, hands, face, and feet need work proportion wise. Keep it up :D
This should make the Front page
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